7/7 blog challenge

My fellow historical-fiction writer C.P. Lesley has tagged me in the 7/7 challenge, which means I get to give you a brief snippet from my WIP—the first seven lines of the seventh page, to be precise—and then tag seven more writers to carry on the challenge. First, though, be sure to check out C.P.’s website! Her latest novel, The Golden Lynx, is set in 16th-century Russia; you can find out more about it here.

Without further ado, here are seven lines from my WIP, Aquae, which is a YA historical fantasy/fairy-tale retelling set in Roman-occupied Wales (read a blurb for it here). In this scene, my MC Marius has just returned home at an ungodly hour, and has some explaining to do.

“Stephanos—”

“Na.” Stephanos was not Greek, but British, and it still tempered the edges of his tongue from time to time. “Na, it’s not to me you must explain it. Get you along quickly now. He’s in his study.”

My mouth went dry as dust and ashes.

“Stephanos—” It came out a croak this time, the sound of new saddle-leather squeaking.

“Get along.” He squeezed my elbows tight in his fingers again, reassuring, then let them go.

Now I get to pick seven other writers to keep the meme going! I encourage you to check out each and every one of them; they’re all remarkable writers, and great encouragements to me.

Thanks again to C.P. for tagging me! I hope you guys have enjoyed.

  • https://midenianscholar.wordpress.com/ Alyssa

    Nice! I love “the sound of new saddle-leather squeaking”-what a lovely way to combine worldbuilding with description!

    (and yessss this is the perfect way to keep me procrastinating from homework for a few more minutes!)

    • https://amandamccrina.com Amanda

      Haha, that’s pretty much why I did it-I should really be working on a presentation instead. ;)

  • https://hazelwest.blogspot.com Hazel West

    love the snippet! I’m putting up my contribution post when I find all my people :P

  • https://mjohnsonstories.net mary

    Gosh, thanks, Amanda! What a lovely thing to say; you made my day. I also like this excerpt a lot. It’s vivid and has me worried for your young protagonist - who’s clearly in some kind of trouble.

    Not sure I have seven other authors to tag who haven’t been tagged already, but I’ll try to keep it going. BTW - did you get my last revision? If not, I’ll send it again.

    • Amanda

      Could you resend it, Mary? I think it must have gotten lost somewhere in the murky depths of my inbox…

      And I’m sure it’d be all right if you didn’t tag quite seven people. ;)

      Thanks to everyone for the kind comments!

      • https://mjohnsonstories.net mary

        I resent it, Amanda, and I’ve also posted my 7/7 challenge! (Please let me know if you got the chapter. :) )

        • https://amandamccrina.com Amanda

          Got it! And your 7/7 is great. :)