In which she admits to being elitist

I think most of what is called “elitist” is a mask for anti-intellectualism — I mean, there is such a thing as excellence.

The above is from a 1992 interview with Susan Sontag, the transcript of which I read here. It’s a great interview filled with wonderful reflections on writing and literature and it touches on something I’ve been thinking about for a while—ever since I decided to self-publish His Own Good Sword, possibly ever since I started thinking seriously about publishing at all. There is indeed a strong anti-elitist current running through the modern literary landscape, exacerbated and best illustrated by the boom in self-publishing and the exploding popularity of events like NaNoWriMo (which last year had nearly 400,000 participants worldwide), but by no means limited to the ranks of self-published writers. Words like “elitism” and “gatekeepers” connote stuffiness and obsolescence. To be elitist is to be out-of-touch with the state of modern publishing. After all, writing is democratic: everyone should have the right to express their creativity in words.

The problem is that when you write—and especially when you choose to make your words known to the world—you’re entering into a great conversation that’s been going on for thousands of years. While it’s not mandated by some sort of Writing God that you pay careful attention to what’s gone before you, what’s already been said, it certainly makes you seem presumptuous when you don’t—when you consider yourself ready to engage in the discussion with a minimum of preparation or with no preparation at all. Everyone has the right to write, but with that right comes responsibility: to listen, to learn, to be aware of your context, above all to read, and especially the classics (and not just the 20th-century classics; the roots of contextualization need to go much deeper).

As writers we’re told constantly to be immersed in our market. This means reading what’s currently popular, particularly in our chosen genre. This is problematic. This is equivalent to building an economy around one export item, making yourself entirely dependent on that item; and then when the demand shifts or you’ve used up all your resources you’ve got nothing to fall back on. Essentially writers need to diversify if they want staying power. (There’s absolutely no reason you shouldn’t be reading Dostoevsky and Tolstoy if you write YA contemporary. If you argue that there is, perhaps it says more about the state of YA contemporary than anything else.)

If it’s elitist to argue that writers should strive for contextual awareness in the landscape of literature, then I have to admit I’m elitist. But in all honesty it’s remarkably humbling to realize your place in the conversation.

  • Louise Bates

    As you say, it’s more about responsibility than elitism. I see a huge tendency to throw the word “elitism” or its equivalent into a conversation to just shut down communication entirely. But it shouldn’t be that way, because there IS a responsibility that comes with writing (or anything), and we can’t ignore it by labeling it elitism.

    • Amanda McCrina

      Yes, I agree. As Sontag says, there is such a thing as excellence. But it takes time and hard work, in writing as in anything else, and unfortunately I feel the current publishing atmosphere discourages writers from striving for it (the pressure to release books quickly, to conform to the market, etc.). But it’s so much easier to cry “elitism” than to change anything.

  • maryj59

    Great post, Amanda! I agree both that (1) everyone has the absolute
    right to write - to tell their own story in any way they please, and (2)
    anyone who hopes to write for publication has a responsibility to know
    the stories that have gone before. I guess that makes me “elitist”, too -
    no surprise! Seriously, there are two issues I have, both as a writer
    and as a professional librarian, with the state of current YA. The first
    is that, to my mind, some books being published by the “big box”
    publishers don’t meet basic standards for quality. The second is that,
    even though some fine books continue to be published (and, yes,
    well-edited), there is less room for true risk-taking. It seems,
    sometimes, that everyone is looking for “the next Harry Potter” or “the
    next Twilight”. I really admire some of the current best-sellers and am
    utterly baffled by others!

    What this boils down to:
    I don’t thinkthe real gulf in publishing is between mainstream publishing and self-publishing. I think the real gulf is between those who strive for
    excellence and those who publish in haste, hoping to make lots of money.
    Does that sound awful of me? The last thing I want to do is to put
    anyone down! But I think some fine, high-quality books have been
    self-published. Some fine-high quality books have been traditionally
    published. That’s not really the division here.

    My two cents!

    • Amanda McCrina

      I agree-it’s definitely not a simple dichotomy between self-publishing and traditional publishing; I think your observation as to the real reason rings true. As I said above, I think this is due to the pressure on writers to release books ever more quickly (multiple releases a year now, in some cases) and the pressure to conform to current demand, which as you say discourages risk-taking.

  • L.C. McGehee

    “There’s absolutely no reason you shouldn’t be reading Dostoevsky and Tolstoy if you write YA contemporary. If you argue that there is, perhaps it says more about the state of YA contemporary than anything else.” - This is a very good point, and it reminds me of something I find troubling. I read
    a comment in a forum that implied that one wouldn’t want to spend too much time reading classics, because it wouldn’t be helpful to emulate a style that’s outdated and no longer holds the interest of most readers (i.e. it’s too slow, too detailed, the dialogue is too wordy, the paragraphs are too long.). And everywhere you look, people are constantly saying that big words andlong sentences are a bad thing, because they’re pretentious and make your writing stuffy and dull.

    • Amanda McCrina

      ‘If very few young writers even want to bring their craft to the ultimate level, could we be in danger of losing that height of skill altogether?’…I think it’s very much a danger. I think there’s the risk of a terrible downward spiral here: young authors devote the bulk of their reading time to the currently popular books in their genre, which informs their writing, which informs their readers, which in turn informs new writers. Without constantly pulling in from other sources, from the classics of the past, from other genres-I think a loss of quality is inevitable.

      And I agree with your observation re. the distinction between “storytelling” and “writing.” In a truly great book, the language is given as much attention as the story. It doesn’t have to come at the expense of story-I dislike plodding, plotless “literature” as much as anybody-but it needs to be as much a part of the book as the story. And that takes time and effort. If the foremost concern is to make money, it’s unsurprising that careful devotion to wordcraft is jettisoned. (Of course, the flipside of this is our laziness as readers-our willingness to buy and obsess over poorly written books. We create the demand.)